GFX T-Shirt Design

[Goggwell 17.8k]

So my friend asked me if I wanted to design a shirt for my school. As usual, I say yes.

So I began work on my own design.

 

Some things to point out:

- Our mascot is a dragon

- Our school colors are blue + red + white

- We are an international school

 

After submitting my design to the board committee, they rejected my shirt design.

(I was sad, but OK with it)

 

It was fine, because my school never pays me for the work I do anyways.

 

I have designed over 5 works for my school, and the reward I receive is "Thank You!"

 

I know, stupid right?

 

Anyways, here is the design they rejected:

 

Lemme know what you guys think. I might make a shirt similar to this up for sale!

[Rook 556.9k Donor]

Looks like someone needs a new school because this is awesome haha

[Klepto 7.8k]

The dragon doesn't look fierce enough.

[Goggwell 17.8k]

The dragon doesn't look fierce enough.

Y u do dis

[Klepto 7.8k]

Y u do dis

[Salman1700 916]

nice

Updated September 9, 2015 by Salman1700

[Zahir 394.5k]

my honest opinion is

 

the colors dont match

 

red with dark blue? common

[Klepto 7.8k]

my honest opinion is

 

the colors dont match

 

red with dark blue? common

The colors are fine. Just the dragon that needs a bit of tweaking. Imo

[Raggnar 8.5k]

my honest opinion is

 

the colors dont match

 

red with dark blue? common

 red with dark blue dont match?

Guess you are not a Spider Man's fan  

[Earthiest 1.1k]

If I do say, what would the shirt be worn for? Because I guess they rejected it possibly because it wasn't fitting into what they initially wanted it for. 

I guess like if they wanted a school mascot kinda shirt, it'd be more you know "energetic/loud" kinda feel. I like the clean design though, if not a school shirt keep

it for a company shirt. Other than that, everything looks clean and visible. I'm still not sure why they rejected this.. You should've seen my High School senior

shirt haha.. it was horrible.