GFX Some simple still working to improve my text

Lion-O · March 28, 2015

Sup guys this just something simple still working on my font text so bare with me lol enjoy

Rook · March 28, 2015

I like it, the background looks nice but I'm not sure about this big text reading S.T.A?

Lion-O · March 28, 2015

Those are the initials of the person lol I like it big but I need a more creative font and way to incorporate it to make it pop lol I'm still working on it so it will change

LookOut · March 28, 2015

Yeah, the S.T.A. looks too simple for the background. You could make it blend with the background and add just a bit of depth to it.

Lion-O · March 28, 2015

Yeah, the S.T.A. looks too simple for the background. You could make it blend with the background and add just a bit of depth to it.

I like it, the background looks nice but I'm not sure about this big text reading S.T.A?

here goes my other attempt what you think?

Rook · March 28, 2015

here goes my other attempt what you think?

Yep! Fire makes it hotter now but the text needs to be a bit more visible

LookOut · March 28, 2015

It reminds me of BBQ

Looks much better. The 'INSTRUMENTALS' text and logo looks like it doesn't belong here anymore. Logo is flat, the rest is complicated - I don't think that those both worlds should combine.

Lion-O · March 29, 2015

It reminds me of BBQ

Looks much better. The 'INSTRUMENTALS' text and logo looks like it doesn't belong here anymore. Logo is flat, the rest is complicated - I don't think that those both worlds should combine.

Trying to see how I can implement the instrumentals and the text part I'll be working on it for some more hours to see what I can do I want to keep the logo but I might have to change it completely

LookOut · March 31, 2015

Trying to see how I can implement the instrumentals and the text part I'll be working on it for some more hours to see what I can do I want to keep the logo but I might have to change it completely

Any progress?

Lion-O · March 31, 2015

Any progress?

Actually the person I did it for liked it so I just changed it up a few so that his initials would show better and I changed the font on the instrumental part