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    I've got an assignment on making an advertisement poster for a fashion accessory. Gotta take pictures ourselves, of our own whatever. I chose my ring. I want to make something that looks clean, professional, simple. I need feedback on what is wrong with it. The more constructive criticism I get, the more I can improve it. Thanks for any help.

     

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    Klepto Newbie

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    I don't know much about typesetting but is it fine to have two words next to each other that end with "able"?

     

    Besides that I think it looks really good. :D

    Sakswa Newbie

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    1 minute ago, Klepto said:

    I don't know much about typesetting but is it fine to have two words next to each other that end with "able"?

     

    Besides that I think it looks really good. :D

    Should I change the order, then? Fashionable, Masculine, Comfortable?

    ohventurahh Newbie

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    it's really dope!

    only thing that really bothers me is :

    Masculine

    comfortable

    fashionable

    ,i would change masculine to a word that also ends on -able and is around the same length of comfortable and fashionable, otherwise really good looking poster!

    Sakswa Newbie

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    2 minutes ago, ohventurahh said:

    it's really dope!

    only thing that really bothers me is :

    Masculine

    comfortable

    fashionable

    ,i would change masculine to a word that also ends on -able and is around the same length of comfortable and fashionable, otherwise really good looking poster!

    What word, though? 

    ohventurahh Newbie

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    how about:

    admirable or affordable

    i like affordable the best, that would draw attention of people for buying the ring :D

    -hey look a good looking ring that's affordable, maybe i should check it out 

    Sakswa Newbie

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    4 minutes ago, ohventurahh said:

    how about:

    admirable or affordable

    i like affordable the best, that would draw attention of people for buying the ring :D

    -hey look a good looking ring that's affordable, maybe i should check it out 

    I'd rather it be focused towards my audience than being affordable though. I'll keep it as it is.

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