GFX Minimalist Design turned Paper-Clipping Art?

[MickySoFine 3.2k]

I was going for a Minimalist Artstyle,

based on a winter theme.

But somehow I realized this was different and started looking at

it as a Paper-Clipping Art Fail. Ofcourse i stopped working on it.

What do you think? Doesn't this look like a 5th Grader Arts & Craft Class Design?

 

 

Updated December 2, 2015 by MickySoFine

[Klepto 7.8k]

Looks pretty good. Just delete the part of the sun that's showing behind the mountain.

[MickySoFine 3.2k]

Looks pretty good. Just delete the part of the sun that's showing behind the mountain.

 

Like this?

 

 

  

 

[Klepto 7.8k]

on the top right of the sun, one spike shows through the mountain

[IamBeast 8]

Its good nice

[smokey 2.8k]

I like the first one, however, Klepty has a good proposal.

[MickySoFine 3.2k]

Taken into consideration.

[AEGi5 1.5k]

It looks great!

[MickySoFine 3.2k]

It looks great!

 

 

Thanks, still looks like a Paper-Clipping to me