GFX Golem GFX

[LookOut 3.4k]

Yeah, the new one is awesome. Though I would get rid of the golem text.

 

I can see an attempt of blending it with the background, but it still stands out a bit. Maybe if you managed to make it a bit "crushed" - it would add more depth. I'm not sure about making it "melt" - it looks like made of play-doh this way, and what would look great is "GOLEM" text that seems to be made of solid rock.

 

What I meant by "crushed":

 

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of course it's not something that would match the signature straight away - it would need to be blended as well, but it's worth a try. A good example of blending is shown below.

 

Also, this is a nice example of "golem" like text.

 

 

 

Besides from that little suggestion, it's a very good signature. I love it

Updated May 17, 2015 by LookOut

[Lion-O 364]

Yeah, the new one is awesome. Though I would get rid of the golem text.

 

I can see an attempt of blending it with the background, but it still stands out a bit. Maybe if you managed to make it a bit "crushed" - it would add more depth. I'm not sure about making it "melt" - it looks like made of play-doh this way, and what would look great is "GOLEM" text that seems to be made of solid rock.

 

What I meant by "crushed":

 

^

of course it's not something that would match the signature straight away - it would need to be blended as well, but it's worth a try. A good example of blending is shown below.

 

Also, this is a nice example of "golem" like text.

 

 

 

Besides from that little suggestion, it's a very good signature. I love it

thanks for the feedback will look into!