Help/Support Need feedback on advertisement poster

[Sakswa 1.2k]

 

I've got an assignment on making an advertisement poster for a fashion accessory. Gotta take pictures ourselves, of our own whatever. I chose my ring. I want to make something that looks clean, professional, simple. I need feedback on what is wrong with it. The more constructive criticism I get, the more I can improve it. Thanks for any help.

 

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Updated October 29, 2017 by T-Dawg
Updated poster

[Archangel04 33.1k iPhone 7 14.3]

One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them, One Ring to bring them all, and in the darkness bind them

 

It's good 

[datagen 598 iPad Air 2 11.3.1]

Looks really good to me. I love the Roman Numerals on the ring.

[Klepto 7.8k iPhone X 14.5]

I don't know much about typesetting but is it fine to have two words next to each other that end with "able"?

 

Besides that I think it looks really good.

[Sakswa 1.2k]

1 minute ago, Klepto said:

I don't know much about typesetting but is it fine to have two words next to each other that end with "able"?

 

Besides that I think it looks really good.

Should I change the order, then? Fashionable, Masculine, Comfortable?

[ohventurahh 0 iPhone 6 9.3.3]

it's really dope!

only thing that really bothers me is :

Masculine

comfortable

fashionable

,i would change masculine to a word that also ends on -able and is around the same length of comfortable and fashionable, otherwise really good looking poster!

[Sakswa 1.2k]

2 minutes ago, ohventurahh said:

it's really dope!

only thing that really bothers me is :

Masculine

comfortable

fashionable

,i would change masculine to a word that also ends on -able and is around the same length of comfortable and fashionable, otherwise really good looking poster!

What word, though? 

[ohventurahh 0 iPhone 6 9.3.3]

how about:

admirable or affordable

i like affordable the best, that would draw attention of people for buying the ring

-hey look a good looking ring that's affordable, maybe i should check it out 

[Sakswa 1.2k]

4 minutes ago, ohventurahh said:

how about:

admirable or affordable

i like affordable the best, that would draw attention of people for buying the ring

-hey look a good looking ring that's affordable, maybe i should check it out 

I'd rather it be focused towards my audience than being affordable though. I'll keep it as it is.