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Very cool, I like how you blurred out the background like a Bokeh. Love the text and the gradient.

The spaceship wasn't really necessary, looks fake in a cool manipulation.

Maybe take it off. All in all, very cool :clap:

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Very cool, I like how you blurred out the background like a Bokeh. Love the text and the gradient.

The spaceship wasn't really necessary, looks fake in a cool manipulation.

Maybe take it off. All in all, very cool :clap:

 

Okay but what i forgot to say was this image has a message and to try and find it that was sort of the point of the spaceship but i can upload another without it and thanks for feedback!

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Not a fan. Not to be rude but you basically 'attempted' to copy my exact Wallpaper I made but you weren't successful. Some flaws I see are the Spaceship. I understand the message was relating to something around 'Alien life' or 'Space life'. Yet it doesn't blend in with anything and you made no attempt to blend it in. Another problem I see is the Text and the attempt to make it 'standout' which again was unsuccessful in my eyes. The big 'Shadow' so say, is way to huge and only one part actually has a reduced opacity. Another flaw is the 'dust' near the bottom of the screen which the opacity needed to be lowered a tad. The mask you did for the text, which is the picture of the Forest doesn't work, because you put a forest Mask, over a basically a line of trees. It doesn't help is blend in.

 

Very cool, I like how you blurred out the background like a Bokeh. Love the text and the gradient.
The spaceship wasn't really necessary, looks fake in a cool manipulation.
Maybe take it off. All in all, very cool :clap:

He didn't blur the image, he got if off the internet. (Pre blurred)

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Not a fan. Not to be rude but you basically 'attempted' to copy my exact Wallpaper I made but you weren't successful. Some flaws I see are the Spaceship. I understand the message was relating to something around 'Alien life' or 'Space life'. Yet it doesn't blend in with anything and you made no attempt to blend it in. Another problem I see is the Text and the attempt to make it 'standout' which again was unsuccessful in my eyes. The big 'Shadow' so say, is way to huge and only one part actually has a reduced opacity. Another flaw is the 'dust' near the bottom of the screen which the opacity needed to be lowered a tad. The mask you did for the text, which is the picture of the Forest doesn't work, because you put a forest Mask, over a basically a line of trees. It doesn't help is blend in.

 

He didn't blur the image, he got if off the internet. (Pre blurred)

Thank you for the feedback Mr. Davinci

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Not a fan. Not to be rude but you basically 'attempted' to copy my exact Wallpaper I made but you weren't successful. Some flaws I see are the Spaceship. I understand the message was relating to something around 'Alien life' or 'Space life'. Yet it doesn't blend in with anything and you made no attempt to blend it in. Another problem I see is the Text and the attempt to make it 'standout' which again was unsuccessful in my eyes. The big 'Shadow' so say, is way to huge and only one part actually has a reduced opacity. Another flaw is the 'dust' near the bottom of the screen which the opacity needed to be lowered a tad. The mask you did for the text, which is the picture of the Forest doesn't work, because you put a forest Mask, over a basically a line of trees. It doesn't help is blend in.

 

 

He didn't blur the image, he got if off the internet. (Pre blurred)

Oh, then what did he do to it?

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Oh, then what did he do to it?

He added the Spaceship, Life text, and the Forest inside the Life text, also the Black underline of the text. He also added some smoke stocks for the ship. Pretty much the Guy and the City is a image online. But all the other stuff besides that is all his.

Thank you for the feedback Mr. Davinci

I'm no Davinci but I just take pride in my work. I hope that comment didn't come off 'rude'. It was just letting you know how I feel and also giving you feedback.

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I think it looks really good, but I do not like the black parts of the text "LIFE", and as already started, the spaceship dosnt really fit in, but I guess you need it to convey your message

Posted

I think it looks really good, but I do not like the black parts of the text "LIFE", and as already started, the spaceship dosnt really fit in, but I guess you need it to convey your message

Nah, He could've added stars, and made the image darker. :)

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