Portofolio Second Graphic Design Ever!

[Jafforo 689]

My GFX portofolio

 

Hello everybody, my name is Vemtrix. Some of you may know me from the cheating section of IOSGods. I have just recently started in graphic design and I'm in love with it. My first design was something very simple and I took my time with it. It took me at least 3 tries to actually get it the way I wanted. I am looking for critique and words of advice from the experts or intermediate designers in this part of the forum. My design will be listed below for you to grade from -F to A+ . Please do not give me a pity vote if it is bad. Tell me how it truly is and give me advice. Thanks! 

 

 

Second Design: 

Completed 10/10/15

 

 

Third Design: 

Completed 10/11/15

 

Fourth Design:

Completed: 10/18/15

 

Fifth Design:

Completed: 10/18/15

 

 

Updated October 18, 2015 by Vemtrix

[Amuyea 88.1k]

is that a quote?

[Jafforo 689]

is that a quote?

 

 

Yes, it is one of J Cole's lines in "Born Sinner". 

[Amuyea 88.1k]

should be like "Aren't We all Sinners? -J Cole

[Jafforo 689]

should be like "Aren't We all Sinners? -J Cole

Thanks for the advice, Look at the design again

[AEGi5 1.5k]

Really cool design man 

[Amuyea 88.1k]

looks good but the text might be off.

 

@Lion-O

[Jafforo 689]

Really cool design man 

Simple but all I can do with the knowledge I have.

looks good but the text might be off.

 

@Lion-O

Its not the text, the resolution was stuck to 720 by 461. I wanted it to be 720 by 480 but it never corrected so it looks a little bit off but Photoshop was being a butt. 

[Amuyea 88.1k]

Simple but all I can do with the knowledge I have.

Its not the text, the resolution was stuck to 720 by 461. I wanted it to be 720 by 480 but it never corrected so it looks a little bit off but Photoshop was being a butt. 

ah, well. maybe background would make renders look better but im not sure about the text

[Jafforo 689]

ah, well. maybe background would make renders look better but im not sure about the text

 

I'm just starting into using backgrounds, but its a lot easier to mess-up when you have a really flashy background. Im going to watch some graphic design "tutorials" and see what I can learn and put it to good use.