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Okay guys this story is completely made up by my mind and i suggest you put your full focus on this text when you read it!

i also highly reccoment you lisen to this music when reading it:  

 

 

 

 

The girl who couldent scream for help, by Yterby.
 
 
 
 
 
A long time ago i knew this girl named Elissa, i had known her since childhood.
As a kid i didnt have many friends, they seemed to avoid me just because i looked diffrent, yeah i forgot to tell you, i was born with
a disformity on my body, i'm incapable of walking propperly, you might even say i walk like a zombie...
The only friend i had was Elissa, she didnt judge me for my apperence, she was also rejected by society, she couldent talk or make a sound as she
was a mute.
Me and Elissa had a special relationship as we both we're diffrent we could only rely on echouther, we changed secrets as many kids do, and played together.
It's all hard to remember but i remember one time when Elissa and me was walking down the street, we had just bought ourselves a icecream, there was a
car that pulled over right besides us, the passangers or the driver did not come out of their car, they just sat in there and stared at us for some moments.
Eventually one of them pointed their finger at me and started laughing so loud it sounded like a hyena, Elissa threw her icecream at the van in rage,
the laughter instantly stopped.
The driver slammed hes door open and tried to grab Elissa, he missed by an inch.
Elissa and me ran for our lives, well she ran.. i just kind of '' walked '' really quick because of my disformity.
The driver grabbed me and pushed me into the ground and started dragging me to he's van, he opened the trunk and threw me in there, i saw how many
people there were around us just staring at him, nobody did anything..
The driver started he's engine and started driving as fast as the car was possible of.
After about three minutes i saw Elissa running besides the road, i hoped the driver and the passangers would miss seeing her, my prays were for nothing,
one of the passangers spotted her and ordered the driver to pull over, the grabbed Elissa and threw her in the trunk with me, we we're both crying now.
After a while the van stopped, the opened the trunk and one of the passangers took Elissa and dragged her into an old house, then another guy took me and did the same.
I only saw Elissas facial expressions when the guy dragged her away, you could see how terrified she was.
The guy locked me in a dark room. i couldent see anything, there was just walls and a door, kind of like a closet.
A day or two passed, they didnt supply me with food or water or anything for me to survive on, i thought i was going to die in that closet, i heard someones
feet moving around outside the door, it passed my room and kept walking the corridor, after about 5 seconds i heard a dark creepy voice saying:
There you are little girl, hahahah yeah this is going to be inside of you, i bet you can't wait huh?
I was terrified, i knew what the man was going to do with my best friend, i tried and tried to break down the door with no result, all i could do was lisen.
I kept hearing the mans thrusts, after a short while they stopped, i heard a loud bang like of someone dropped something on the floor.
I heard steps comming towards my door, the door opened, i was ready to charge and attack the person who was gonna open the door, but what i saw gives me nightmares to this day.
What i saw was Elissa covered in small spots of dark blood all over her dress, she hinted me to follow her with her hand gestures, i folowed her, we barely walked 
a few metres before we heard a scream comming from behind us, it was a bloody man, probably the one who tried to molest Elissa earlier.
He sprinted towards us like a mad bull and right before he grabbed us he tripped on a rug and we didnt even think we just ran straight forward to get as 
far away from the man as we could, we succsessfully hid behind a big sofa where we looked into eachothers eyes, i saw how terrified she was.
I asked what she had done with the man, she just shaked on her head like she didnt want to say.
We started running towards the entrence of the old shed, i slammed the door open and after several days we could finaly see sunlight, we kept running away 
from that f**king shed.
In the glimse of my eye i could see how there was 2 men running after us, one was carrying a rifle.
I screamed in terror and ran faster than ever before, i heard a loud BAM from behind and i figgured they must have missed me.
Once again i looked back and saw Elissa with a big hole in her chest, she fell down on the cold rocky road, i just stopped and couldent move..
The men catched up to her and dragged her back to the shed, i could see her organs fell out of the big dark hole in her chest, there was blood everywhere.
For some reason the men just took Elissa and decided to not come after me.
The last thing i saw was Elissas face, her facial expressions told me everything.. The pain she must have felt that day..
To this day i have no idea where she is and if shes even alive, all though i'm pretty sure her fate ended horribly..
 
 
 
This is the first time i tell anyone of this, please don't hesitate to tell me if you know anything else of my dear old friend ! ! !
 
 
 
Kinda sinister story i know :x
Posted (edited)

This isn't really much of a creepypasta, because you explain everything. You should have an open ending.

Updated by kloniax
Posted

Wait is this a contest and never knew u did one  :huh:

Nah, we just decided to make our own creepypastas which had a boy in a wheelchair. Just a lil' thing between us :)

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