Let me get back to you i'll just get my death note ^^
(I have a death note containing notes for English )
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Okay first, what is this for and what year are you in ?
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Avoid using words such as:
- shows
- showed
Use active verbs like
- Demonstrates
- Depicts
- Displays
- Establishes
- Implies
First line
Karate Kid was an inspirational film
use 'is'
Speeches are usually supposed to be formal, your speech is a little bit colloquial
imagine writing an essay but you need to read it. But you don't need to follow the STEEL format
(Statement, Technique, Example, Effect, Link to statement)
~ I just remembered i can't technically help you with your speech because you need to do it yourself or else it'll be considered plagiarism but i think i can still give you some tips
Intro:
What's the question that you need to answer in this speech ? You can always start with that then just expand. Throw in a couple of big words then BAM !
For example:
Struggles and achievement has a complex domino effect on those closest to you. A Beautiful Mind (2001) directed by Ron Howard exemplifies the latter as it conveys the life of Mathematician, John Nash.
Struggles and achievement have a complex domino effect on those closest to you (Question). A Beautiful Mind (2001) directed by Ron Howard (Film and who directed it) exemplifies the latter as it conveys the life of Mathematician, John Nash. (Fancy words that imply that the film portrays the stuff asked by the question )